Wow great job on this. i really like the imagination in it about the "see through man". great job! 5/5

~Kristina

Wow! such a poewerful poem!
I really like the way you refered to him as 'the see through man'
great job 5/5

~Murder.

I liked this poem... 5/5 you did a great job.

Confusing. i liked it but if i think if u went more into the metaphor of a "see through man" it would have made it more interesting. good poem though. i liked the format and the repetiotion. it was good.