I lykd it alt..it waz nicely writtn and 4 sur a 5/5...nice job =) plez rate and commnt mine poem'z pleez??
*^Miss**Independant~^

Wow this was a great one and I think this is one of your masterpiece I love the rhythm and the flow of this poem I love how you put those pictures on your head I love the feelings that inclose to this This was AWESOME one

Keep writting I know you can make more poems

Geneross