Comments : My confusing emotions...

  • 17 years ago

    by ForeverYoung

    Good poe, although i dont realy understand why you have Do in capital letters in the second and third stanza.

    The flow needs a little work, but over all it a good poem.

    In answer to all the questions in the poem, the most important thing is you, and its up to you what you choose, but be honest to others and with yourself and you will find that things start looking a little clearer.
    Be strong and be true to yourself!

    All the best

    4/5

    ~Murder.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Though poems not really flowed well, i really like the way u write, i understand what this poem trying to say! i actually expreience about this situation i got so confusing into my self and dont know what to do.. so this is great poem for me.. most important u write it w/ all of ur heart so great job and keep it up5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Nicole

    This is a really good poem. 5/5 ur a really good writer. its so fluent and easy to know what ur trying to say well done. keep writing

  • 17 years ago

    by Esther

    Like, i liked! nice! 5/5! i don't understand why every-one has been giving it a 4? stupid jelous peole that down-vote should be shot!!