Comments : I wanted to say.

  • 17 years ago

    by michelle lynn

    I love your poem. it actually gets me thinking about my ex boyfriend that i still love. its a great poem!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Daniel, something beautiful poem you potray here, though simply but well writing, awesome!

  • 17 years ago

    by in spite of love

    Sweetie, this is adorable. I love it, keep it up. ^-^ 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Ren

    Awwwww!!!!!! Thats soo sweeeettttt! hehe. Cute poem, but very powerful. I loved iiiitttt! :D I hope things work out with whoever you wrote that for, if you wrote it for someone. lol. Keep writing your wonderful poems!

    Take care!