That was so good ... not that that happened but the poem lol but that was really good and i hope that didn't happen to you and if it did i am so terribly sorry from the bottom of my heart no one should have to go through anything like that!!!!!!!!!!!!
you are a talented writer
thanx for the comment!
Taylor

Man girl are all your poems that good? if they are the rest of us might as well quit now. no one could compete with that. keep it up.

The ending blew me away.

Thank you...i really appreciate ur comment. most pple just read the poems and never rate or comment.

Very nice piece of poetry with superb flow and great lexical quality. You have portrayed the feelings so well and I appreciate that. 5/5 all the way

I take one last breath
Because of a past I cant face
I'd rather welcome my own death
Than the memories i can not erase...

Catching lines
TC with love
Fsams

The end was amazing, it brought tears to my face.. Wonderfully written.