The flow was oof..i dont know why esp the first line, try less words more detial;...but great point keep it up.

lissa

I Like Your Poetry Your A Great Love Poem Writer Great Job On This One 5/5
Love,
Steph

TONY..this is good!

Love it, makes me feel...

Luv ur poem..

by the way...ur quote where u wrote "i love u" on the back with ur fingers was s0o0o0o cute...=)

Awesome job again, tony!!