Good poem. So descriptive, I loved your word usage. Keep it up!

Hey di me gusto india good job the words u use compliment each other
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This is a really good poem i like it! keep writing

Hey i totally dig this poem, i love the way you have written it, it works really well, keep up the good work :)

Great poem. 5/5 i loovvee it

To the point and well expressed

Thanks for commenting on mine, this poem is great, the depth of pain is aluring.

Lol u couldn't be more wrong love the poem 5/5 keep up the good work im going to read more