Comments : Living My Life From the Outside

  • Thats reallly good ad deep. i love u nicole lol

  • 17 years ago

    by Thoughtless Consideration

    Lol nicole im so happy u got a poemsandquotes thingymajig.
    and geez..
    i can relate to this, sadly.
    great rhyming and examples and all that shiz! love u and the poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by blueknight

    Yeah this was a great poem with a great meaning to the one who can relate to it the pictures was vivid or clear

    Just I found out that some of it didnt rhyme well then if you write poem with no rhyme you can put a little rhythm to it so the reader can enjoy reading it

    btw great and beutifully penned

    geneross