Comments : All That I Am

  • 17 years ago

    by xxEvilAngelxx

    I'm already in love with your writing, after one poem. --- Wonderfully written and worded. Keep up the great work! 5/5

    yours truly-
    xxEvilAngelxx

  • 17 years ago

    by xblackxrosesx79x

    Amazing.
    gave me chills.
    keep writing.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "If I just say
    Those three words
    Would you tell me too?"

    The three words that everyone can relate to. It's funny how uttering those syllables can alter the way someone feels about you. They either return the feeling or are pushed away. But it's a risk that must be taken in most cases.
    This poem had a good structure, i liked it.
    Excellent poem overall
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 16 years ago

    by danielle

    Hey good job keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Mandy Grace

    I loved your poem. it was real.

    xx mandy

  • 16 years ago

    by June

    Beautifully written ,very well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by ChAsInG PavEmEnTs

    I love this poem!! its so on point for me,
    you use good words its like a little story in a poem form that i can relate to (which is really rare for me)

  • 16 years ago

    by kasia nicole

    I really love your writting you have such good talent and i like the words you use 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Oh splendid! This was a poem from the heart, i can feel it. Very well.

    "If I just say
    Those three words
    Would you tell me too?"

    i loved that stanza. keeping writing, and never give up.