Excellent. So much feelings!
I love the lines:
"I stay so calm on the outside
And admit to other's what I resist
But when I see a particularly happy face
I just might get the urge to hit it"
^^^
Those lines really stood out in the poem. The words were so linked, meaningful && I could relate to those lines too.
And also:
"I feel myself pushing for happiness
While stronger emotions hold me down"
^^^
I love those, my absolute favourite lines in this poem. I guess, (1) because I can relate and (2) They're just really powerful, good lines.

Well excellent job with this poem, overall the rhyming was great and the poem flowed really well, keep it up and take care!!

"Take chances, make mistakes. That's how you grow. Pain nourishes your courage. You have to fail in order to succeed."

Wow.. thats deep the stanza about yelling at an innocent stranger.. thats where it home for me.. You're incredible.

-Rachel

I really liked this poem, to me it ment you just want all the bul-shit to stop like people trying to act all happy and cheerful when they know omething is wrong and to stop being blinsided by beauty and get back into relaity. At least that is what it ment to me. Oh yeah to slepp all day and forever would be nice, i guess to kind of blow our problems away in a secnce. Anyways great poem

jessie