Its awesome you chose the right words it has so much emotion,I LOVE IT.5/5.
~Shareeda~

This is an amazing poem. 5/5. ur a good writer. *hugs* keep writing. ur welcome to talk to me anytime. i know what its like to be feeling like this and yeah it does get repititive hearing it but still. great work on the poem keep it up

That poem is amazing. i know where ur comin from.
keep writing

That was soo deep. i can relate to it easily.

Good poem. Like the flow, and can relate to it. Keep it up. 5/5