Wow that is a really moving poem!!! I really like it!! 5/5!

It seems you're talking to more than one person in general - which makes the title so perfect...for people who look down on you; people who preach, giving advice when they know nothing of your situation

just two nitpicky suggestions: i really don't like the use of the word "wanna", it won't hurt the syllable count to say "want to". and for the sake of grammar, "bouquet of rose" is just slightly off...it *needs* to be "roses", though that would mess up the rhyme, so maybe (for syllable count + rhyming's sake), you could change it to "a single rose".

i hope this works. every time i try to comment on someone's work, this website signs me out! and i have to log back in and do it all over again, and it keeps signing me out until..for whatever reason, it finally works. this is why i'm not a very active person on the R/R/C thread ^_^"