Nice words
nice methopers
overall a very great poem with deep emotions, this was really great. a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

Very interesting indeed,
You have a way with words that makes me read carefully,
The first lines intrigues me,

"The steady voices heard, but meaning nothing,"- hmmm..I think it would sound better if --"but means nothing...I dont know I think its better that way.

"Lifting her head from the ground, she nods,"- this line is my favourite, it has a lot of emotions.story.

Overall a great read.

Keep on writing on what you feel and like.
5/5

God Bless!

Great poem 5/5

Its sad, but i love it. I really like the emotian you put in it. Really good! Keep it up! xx

This sounds like a car crash.. and maybe someone didn't make it through.. I'm not sure.

Anyways.. I thought you described everything wondefuly in this piece. Nicely done! Keep it up!

Natalie``

This poem had alot of visials and a very good read, although really not something I would normally read, I enjoyed it. 5/5 for the visials!