I like the rythem! just don't give ur heart away to soon. but if this is the "one and only" then i'm really happy for u...i hope me and my bf are blessed with that. keep writing hun!!

Follow ur heart hun listen to it love the poem but dont leave it to be broken either bye

Awww! Sweet poem. ((L0ves iT!)) Great rhyming, flow, everything. Writing from the heart I see. Keep it up Darling!