In the last stanza it says:

"To spend to with me,"

Is that supposed to be time instead of 'to'?

It was a good poem anyway

I just think it lacks originality. I mean you could look at it in a different way to make it more interesting.

Unless it has a deep meaning to you then it doesnt really matter because you just need to express yourself and your emotions so thats fair enough.

4/5 from me.

~Emma

I can relate to this and know exactly how u feel.. beautifully written, great job 5/5 :)

~[AnotherDream]~

Aww that's sad.. I can relate to the first half of this poem, although I believe she does love me.. just not enough :[
Well done on this poem, it was beautifully written 5/5 xx

All of your poems seem to be short and to the point. i wish that i could write like you.