Comments : The "Lord's" Prayer

  • 17 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Well done...short but gets to the point
    auna

  • 17 years ago

    by Kylead

    Well done
    you didnt depress me
    you kept true to the dark poem part of the site for this 5/5 and keep writing i chack frequetently on dark and dark fantasy

  • 17 years ago

    by ♥ brokendolly ♥

    I love it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Pandorra13

    NICE! i like it (though i believe earth itself is a purgetory. theres no real hell except here.)