Comments : Ill try not to cry

  • 17 years ago

    by Brooke Mason

    David...such a powerful poem. i like this one the best. i can definately feel the emotion in every single word. excellent, bravo mon ami, bravo!

  • 17 years ago

    by Whisper

    David, that's amazing!!! I'm blown away completely. I can't even describe it... I loved it.

    Love Always
    ~Casey J.

  • 14 years ago

    by divine divinity

    Intense, hear wrenching, expressive, beautifully written, again flawless, such pain in the words, its difficult not to read it, I'm glued to every word.