Wow that was deep and....im speechless.....excellent poem!!!! 5/5

Love it! 10/5

Wow very nice poem..you have talent i can say that.....rachy

Wow...i really liked this one as well...excellent job...keep up the good work.

WOW!!! this is such an amazing poem...I really really liked it...

Thats a crazy tulip man!! nice poem it was mysteriously amazing. 5/5 !props!

This has to by far be the best I read from the three. It flowed so flawlessly that each word had it place. The imagery from beginning to end was captivating and you descriptive details were effective. Well done *5/5*

Excellent, I really loved this poem. Although I think it should have been in miscellaneous and not sad poems. Even though the ending was quite said, the title was not fit for a sad poem. However well done 5/5

Well..you definately are talented, my young friend!
Keep up the good work. I loved this poem by the way, it has a very deep message and it kept me spellbound from start to finish!

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

This was different , but i liked it :) 2nd stanza was my fav

You have to leave more information from interpretation in this poem. You can't just leave it "longing demise" because you did not leave enough information to know what the Tulip is for.

However, I will try to take a swing at it.

I am aware that sometimes, Tulips are used in funeral ceremonies.

"I" felt that the poem was about an old man looking through a family chest. Perhaps their were thing sin the chest, but not of importance, so that is why he said their was and empty space.

I see in my eyes, I am having a picture of him, looking at a Tulip, a flower. Maybe of his fathers, wife, or someone of great emotional and sentimental importance to him. He looks at the flower and maybe he is thinking, that perhaps his time draws near. That it could be that someone else, maybe a son or daughter, close relatives or friends. Might use a Tulip as the main flower of his future yet to be funeral.

I think, he see's his death near.

That is my interpretation of it.

_[Deathly'Amore]

This was an amazing piece. Your emotions were deeply expressed through your intense words. Everything fit so perfectly and the flow was flawless. And this piece is too amazing to simply pick ONE favorite stanza, or even just a few favorite lines. a great write. 5/5.

Shivers much! This is a chillingly powerful write. Just, so well written, great rhyme, flow, really natural and incredibly clever.

5/5

Em xXx

A-M-A-Zing! I'm honestly at an awe. This was Excellent! Keep it up!

5/5

-ally