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Nice write, it's got a creepy, eerieness to it, and i like that.

Thankyou for your time

Its good.

and yeah it is eerie, yes it is sad. and i know you say sad poems make you happy but it makes me happy to know your still writing.

good ob

Good choice of words! little short! 5/5 for vocab

This poem really shows out the emotions. You built this wonderful image in my mind. Keep up the great work.

I like it, it inspired me by writing a new poem... =)
u can read it soon on my page tho...

grtz
Spike