Excellent choice of words... A really really nice poem there. Woo! Your poetry is really great!
5/5
Chris...

LOVE IT!!! its really oultstanding! great choice of words...brilliant rhyme scheme....u should really keep up the good work....if u could coment on my poems id love it
andi

I really liked this one too! Jpoet*

Wow, this is such a wonderful poem with a deep emotions, i really liked every line of it, as i can relate to it, you have such a wonderful talent and you are a great poet, keep up the great work and a 5/5 forthis poem as it deserve much more than a vote, words can not explain how beautiful thi poem is........

Hey hun a very heartfelt poem. xx

Great job! And I know I have to be careful with my heart this time around. And though I'm not completely over Jake yet, I gotta try to get over him, you know what I mean? I can't dwell on the past and expect Jake to come back. I just gotta move on and see what happens. Great job on this poem. I know what you mean!
xoxo