Wow..i think it's good just like that..i love they way you end it...
"My wish is finally granted
I am dead forever more"
it's so good..
auna

Good job! its really sad but true to a lot of ppl....including me! u r a good poet and should definately keep up the good work!

Good poem. Very sad. Great rhyming.

Beautiful poem. 5/5. so sad. ur a good writer. well done. keep it up

Wow thats really intense wow you have some really deep feelings ---

Wow! I can relate to this perfectly! It's awesome! Keep up the great work!
Gabby
AKA
_Giving Up_