Great job. A lot of emotion. I liked it. Keep up the awesome work!

Oh my ! dear girl, the imagery within this piece just gave me goose bumps .

A very creative piece that painted an image of a very painful episode . In both body and spirit .
A great read Sarah, and I fear it may be awhile before these goosebumps settle.....lol

Sarah dear, this absolutely beautiful sad penned, yet cretive piece, very touching write. i'll enjoyed my read, take care. bert ~

I absolutely loved this poem!!

Oh wow. This is absolutely stunning. I've been in that situation plenty of times, and it's my personal opinion that you managed to capture all of the feelings perfectly. Congrats.

I loved it, 5/5

Read this the other day and couldn't comment. Iunno. Whether this was true or not, you have a way of using your imagination to express yourself...does that make any sense? Lol. This was just amazing...I seriously don't know what to say. I wish I could write something like this...Keep it up!! Take care and God bless...

Wow great writting, it sent chils down my spine, i love the way it all flowed! great job

I took pills trust me its not fun
xoxoxox
jamez :)

I luv it,its deep and emotional,keep on writing!

This poem is simply amazing. The sense of imagery is very fascinating. You write very well. If this poem is true, then your writing is the reason to live. Keep up the good work.

Now this poem shows TRUE talent. I loved it. you captured my attention from the title to the end. Absolutley wonderful! Great Job! :D ~Ashley Paul

Pure amazement..=]