Wonderful poem!

And i couldnt agree more abotu taking critisism the wrong way, what the point right? when all we're trying to do is help eachother out. :) as long as one comes with ideas then it's good critisism, but if one just comes with accusations of writing bad poetry then it gets out of hand and then being p*ed off at someone is understandable.

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Jane

A very emotiove poem!
I loved the flow as i was reading it, the wording was spot on!
A very good subject too, not seen a lot like this
Keep writing
5/5 as always
*Gem*

Aww VERY awesome poem I loved it! There's no way you should have a 4.4 poeple don't know what they are talking...eh..rating about I guess. That should be a 5! Well to make it better I gave you a 5. Check out some of mine and tell me what you think. Keep up the good work.

God Bless,
Taylor

This kinda confused me since you wrote about happy familyo n the other poem i liked it though your poems are completely diff to the normal stuff i read so keep it up :):):) xxx alex xxx

You were right...this poem was of great interest to me and i loved it. the flow was exactly on cue and i couldn't have put it ANY better myself. I loved the way you wrote this...and i don't know if it was intentional...but you (as the reader) can inturpert it in different ways...I LOVED IT.
Tristan Elizabeth

I like this a lot .. it reminds me of my father and me because as i got older he driffeted apart from me .. keep writting