Comments : Trying too hard

  • 17 years ago

    by XxFallenxFromxGracexX

    This poem is good...i feel like i can relate to it...being trapped in saddness
    Good work
    Luv FallenxFromxGrace

  • 17 years ago

    by Roxy

    This is a great poem showed lots of emotion.
    You worked it it's very sad but very good.
    xoxroxyxox