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  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Wow... This poem is just wow. Its really great! I really liked the words you used throughout the duration of the poem. Really made the poem intresting. I liked the flow of it. 5/5 Keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    Omg wow! i absolutely was wowed by this! this was really amazing! i haven't read one in a while where i just go "wow, that's really good!" and i just did... bravo, def keep it up and i look forward to the others! 5/5