I liked it alot. It was deep. 5/5 from me

I think you have done a great job and this poem deserve a 5/5... take care

Glad u stopped cutting. Nice poem. 5/5. Wanna check my poem out?? LOLz. haha.

Thanks....this poem isnt realistic tho im not suicidal and never have been =)

Amazing!!! I can't get over how good this poem is! --- So much emotion!!! I'm glad to hear it isnt realistic because you are an awesome poet and i look forward to more incredable works!! Keep it up. 5/5

yours truly-
xxEvilAngelxx

You used the same line I did!! lol

**In the second stanza, it seems to me that "my" should be "me"**

otherwise, very nicely written!!

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Ya lol...i was completely confused by what u meant cuz i didnt recognize ur name lmao....ya stupid spelling errors! lol

Haha i had to comment again (psst, Im not his cinderella... lol) i keep thinking that it's mine, but I'm just stupid like that =P

cIao XxX

Haha cinderella...will take go with me to the crystal ball? hmm no? how bout for a pair of glass slippers! lol

Crystal ball!! LOL I just laughed SO hard!!!

Lol...ya i guess it was kinda random