This poem i wrote it while i was going to school on the bus...i would write few lines every morning..its not very good but then i am not done..i really don't much know where to go with this poem..hmmm
a little advice would be appriciated

Wow farah, you took me to the same sky by your this poem, I think it is so great and specially i luv the line
prisoned and caged by destiny, it is a true message...the only thing you may want to add should be accepting your own fate.....it will make it the greatest poem ever......
great job again