Comments : 9 months

  • 18 years ago

    by Roxy

    Wow, a very strong poem,showing emotion and much more.
    It shows how you felt for him then and how you feel for him now.
    great job.
    xoxroxyxox

  • 18 years ago

    by Flaminia

    Beautiful poem,may be meter should be set up better,but on the emptions it sends and the messages it hides,nothing to say.That's a full 5 out of 5!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Alexandra

    I think you need to work a litle more on your rithm!