Wow, a very strong poem,showing emotion and much more.
It shows how you felt for him then and how you feel for him now.
great job.
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Beautiful poem,may be meter should be set up better,but on the emptions it sends and the messages it hides,nothing to say.That's a full 5 out of 5!!!

I think you need to work a litle more on your rithm!