Lovely write,with a lot of emotions...
Full of yearning..

Another great poem dear,
i luv u and ur poems

Good poem.

something i realized in your poetry is you tend to have the same words starting in your first verse...

example

We use to be perfect together.
We use to have fun.
We use to make plans to stay
together and to become as one.

We use to... is at the beggining and together is repeated... try breaking it up a bit... i find it gives a more.. confident vibe...

Example

We use to be perfect... just you and me
and we always had fun
We use to make plans to stay;
together and to become as one.

or something like that

-Terra

Hey. this is an awesome poem. props!

i especially liked the line that you used a few times:

Nice choice of words. Again, good job. 5/5!

Oh my God, this almost had me crying, for i can relate. My favourite of yours so far. 5/5