This is a very good poem! 5/5

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Wow great piece I love how you use the words so different and the meaning and message your trying to put across was great I love it
Really!!! great

XD

Geneross

No, I've know that feeling,

[ Think you meant "known" instead of "know" ]

No, I've felt that to,

[ "Too" ..not "to" ]

I'm not quiet sure what this feeling is,

[ "Quite" ..not "quiet" ]

Very nice poem though. :] ...It's great when you have that really happy feeling coming along. ;P Awesome job! You just need to fix up those minor mistakes. Keep it up!

Natalie``

Awesome this is a great feeling to read this poem of yours very nice job yah5/5

god bless

There is no flow to this poem, but maybe that was intentional, I'm not 100% sure. I liked a lot of it, and I liked how you made a poem about happiness. But maybe you could go deeper in the emotion that's in it, and what makes you happy. Just a thought.

[No, I've {know} that feeling]
^^Should be {known}

[I'm not {quiet} sure what this feeling is,]
^^Should be {quite}

Keep it up. =) 4/5 xoxo

Samantha

Wow, surprising ending. Loved it. Great way to capture the topic. You could still work on the flow and adding more imagery. Keep it up

I like this. Its an intresting read. Definately unique. I loved the ending!! I liked the message. Its really good! Keep it up! xx

One typo-- it's nowadays, not 'now a days'.
Other than that, this is a good poem. Good meaning, good flow, could have better word choice, but that's ok. The meaning is clearly shown-- 5/5.

I like it . A couple typos, but it`s kcoo .
It has nice meaning to it .
..ღ__MiNDYY

Hehe, that was cute. I like the way you kept guessing in the poem, made us anticipate the answer more! Good job! :) 5/5 Loved it! Keep it up!

Innoc3ntStar

Good poem! The flow could use some work, and in the third and fourth lines, they are too close in wording to each other... All in all, awesome job and keep up the great work!

xxEvilAngelxx

Good poem.It had a couple spelling mistakes and the flow was a little off,but great meaning.And it showed a little bit of emotion,not a lot though.I give it a 4/5 for a good effort and a great meaning.Keep it up.