Comments : Pain

  • 16 years ago

    by Wake

    Wow..that was amazingly expressed.. its clear u put alot of emotions in this one..

    this stanza has alot to say,

    "..Your body seems so
    fragile that even one
    ounce of pain could
    break you apart.."

    and this one simply adds to the experience..

    "..But then again you
    hurt me so much
    that i could care less
    about your life.."

    amazingly done..

    Dont Stop Writing !

    ~Wake~