Comments : Beget this Love

  • 17 years ago

    by Karma Hope

    It had like a shakespear spin to it, I like the use of your vocabulary, very nice!! Karms.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    I think u are a good write! well, keep up the good work and keep on writing and sharing ur very nice poets 5/5

    god bless

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Love it! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    Amazing.. Nothing Bad i can say-except i need to improve my vocabulary.. Amazing. i was blown away. youre one of those few people i think Bob would say can actualyl write love poems.

  • 16 years ago

    by KaKaSHi

    Wow...amazing stephen...not anyone call pull off a shakespearian poem!
    and u did so with flying colours!
    i had to look up wat "sere" meant..:P
    hehe..
    loved the last stanze...
    a 5/5 from me...again...=D

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I adore this..
    I enjoyed the language you used, it created an impression.
    The imagery created vivid pictures, while the flow was good throughout.
    The wording was a pleasure to read, as was the whole poem.
    You did an excellent job with this, you should be proud.