Wow...that was really good. Reminds me a lot of a few people in my past. I really liked this. It touched my heart and soul. A wonderful piece, but you might need to look over some of your grammar. Great job though. 5/5.

Hi Amber thank you for reading my poem. The best part about being young and falling in love is that time does heal all wounds. I lost my love 2 years ago. I wish that I could go back and change any hurt that I might have caused. But one thing I never did was cheat I think it`s the worst thing that anyone can ever do. I wish you good luck and please don`t give up on trust. This was a very good poem keep up the good work you have a talent for speaking from the heart.5/5
Drew

Been there done that bought that t-shirt and matching hat. boys are very munipulative and i hate my ex for doing things like that to me. nice job, the stanzas were broken up into wut u wanted to stand out the most i can tell. i liked the ending and how u kept everything simple even tho we kno it has deeper meaning. thx for the comment,
love ya lots,
sore

This is good.is it about you?cause if it is i can relate.

This is good.is it about you?cause if it is i can relate.

I enjoy reading poems so I have read many poems from many different authors and I want to tell all of the authors who work I enjoyed reading that they are great writers and the should not give up on poetry and the should keep up the good work you are one of those authors I have enjoyed reading your poems thank you for putting them out there!!!