Very sad,If any one has ever sat in a hospital room watching a heart monitor they can relate to this, I`m thankful mine didn`t end this way,good job.

Wow! how can you write not rhyming but still good to read! great job!

E-con, I like the alliteration in the second stanza. another note: all you have to do is delete those question marks, but otherwise, very well written...
Ciao xx *5/5*