Its good, but can be written better. I liked it tho, 4/5

Hi clint i read your poem iti s good i hope that u would never do what your creactor did life is presise keep writting

Thanks to all for reading my first poem.
im not really suicidal it was just a really bad weekend

AWWWW dat poem was soo sad. Dat was a goodpoem though Clint! It was sad! Great job Clint! Have you shown dis' poem to anyone? You should!