HEHE! I love it---The only error I found is on the second line; you have ''my'' instead of ''me''...Then in the last line I think it would sound better if instead of "It's" you put "it is", but that's just an opinion...The rhyme is great and none of it sounded forced at all. The flow is flawless and your word choice made this poem magical---5/5! =-D

Aww..So sweet yet sad at times. Great job with this one. And thinks for the constructive criticism, it meant a lot to me! :) 5/5 You're a great writer, keep it up!

Innoc3ntStar

"Without my center, I can't do a thing,
I'm a living rock in a flowing stream."

Beautiful lines. Great flow. The rhymes didn't sound forced. Good job

I feel like i understand this poem perfectly. it wierd when someone else writes what you feel.

5/5. Great Poem! It meant alot to me cuz I feel like this towards a guy! Great writing! Well done!