W0w!! I havn't read your p0ems in S00 l0ng, this 0ne just reminds me 0f h0w g00d a p0et y0u are. I l0ved this 0ne. The rhyming was great and s0 was the fl0w. It was sad yea, and I really liked the ending lines t00. Keep it up girl!
--Shannon--

I really like this. Its honest and full of emotion. I love the first and last stanza's, they stood out to me most. I also like these two lines:

I've been on the end of that rope,
the one that leads to false hope.

They are really good. Keep up the great work! =] 5/5

Love,
Tammie xo

Kool poem!