Aww hunny! It's sad, powerful, yet loving all at the same time! Well done! But I do feel horrible for you. It sounds like you love him, but he's abusive. =( I hope this isn't true. If it is, I'm here to help.

The flow was good in most places, but could be improved. I still liked it though. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Whoa very nice work here, very nice with the love hate thing coming through in this poem... Keep it up...
Karms.

Hmmm the last line make me smile nice writtten yah! well just keep it up 5/5