This poem draws a deep metal picture because of your great description i also loved some of your quotes the one about when u don't want to feel i really can relate to.

The images in this poem are so very vivid. They make it very powerful. excellent job. well done.

This is one of the best poems ive read. great job!

Thats really powerful hunni. its so short an to the point, it has so much in it and still only short. its really good x x x x take kare x x x