This was very good, great flow and structure, 5/5!!!

Bryan,

Incredible!! What more can I say. The first stanza is my absolute favorite

Wow!...so so cute
Perfect write!..superb!
it had a great flow too and held a lot of emotions...Good job!
5/5
xxPoojaxx

You let me back I to your world
back into your

Other than that, this was really well written, perfect flow, excellent word choice, heartfelt emtion, again job well done 5/5