Cute! thanks for the comments they were greatly appreciated!
5/5

God Bless,
Taylor

Another sweet poem by You :] In the second stanza though was it supposed to be heart instead of heat? If not sorry.. great work once again, well done :] xx

Give me your heat and I'll give you mine

[ Think you meant to have "heart" ]

Baby, canâ??t you see, youâ??re the only one for me
Together is the only place Iâ??d rather be

[ You can easily edit all the errors there ]

Very cute poem though. :] Made me smile. Tehe. Keep it up!

Natalie``

Thats an amazing poem!
the love was flowing in the poem so strong!

Keep it up!

Your 'name' could almost be part of this poem, lol.

I love this line:

I can prove that this is not a textbook romance

All in all, this poem is pretty good. It's a bit wordy, but the meaning is strong. Nice work-- 5/5.

I love this one! i can never write this good! lol.

Great job, I liked it. The wording was good and it flowed well. 5/5

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEE IT!!!!!

Awwww so sweet!! i enjoyed reading it!