"Begging For My Heart
But It Died Awhile Ago
While Ripping Hers Apart"

^My favorite lines, very powerful. Great job, keep it up

You have woven a heart wrenching poem here Nikki .I have missed reading your poetry girl, and it seems this one has been written in inked-tears .
I remember reading your poetry way back when I first joined P&Q and thinking to myself Good-God this girl has talent but why-oh-why does she use all those caps.......lol
But it has become your very own personal style that sets you apart from many . And now I find when I read a poem from Nikki I would be lost without those darn caps.....lol
And believe it or not the first thing I noticed was the (uncapped) "a" in the 3rd stanza, last line ....

Wonderfully written emotional piece.
Your talent is amazing deary and you create such amazing imagery!
Take care, dear friend

Often on this site, people either write for an emotional response or for people to notice their talent at writing. You have managed both beautifully in this poem. The way you put across your sincere apologies is eloquent and emotional. Great poem

Powerful. Beautifully written. There are many reasons why things like this occur. At least you feel the pain and are trying to fix the friendship. Best of luck.

Aaahhh what a sad sory note. sweet thing to try anyway. got a good flow. hope comes:)

Nikki this was a sad poem but I could feel the pain & emotion dripping from every word. Stay strong as we all have ups and downs but in the end what doesn't kill us onlymakes us stronger..all our experiences combine to make us who we are!

Beautilfully written, I hope all works out in the end with you and your friend. I've missed reading your writing, you are so talented. take care XXXXX
JL

Nikki dear, such a beautiful sad penned you potray here, this was simply but writing well with beautiful emotions....all the best for you, take care. bert ~

Nikki!!! Tehe It always exacts me when you post new things..I've had you on my faves forever and only from time to time to you post....
This is so ironic actually, and I'm not lieing, but I was thinking (just for an idea) on Friday that I should write a poem about the EXACT topic because it happens all the time by people who backstab best friends...not saying you did that.....I think its great you admit your mistake and ask for forgiveness which is why I won't judge you or anything...because it takes guts to admit you made a mistake and it takes a lot of guts to just apologize...I loved this poem and your rhymes! Excellent!
Love always,
Chelsey

I like the ending. it got a good flow. keep writing:)

Oh my god...
Im adding you to my favourites...
thats like the third poem of yours i have read... and i loved them all.
And I usually only comment if i like the poem, or if i have said i would.

Great Job...
I Really liked this stanza;

Hateful Glares And Vicious Words
I Know Are Now In Order
And Though She Strikes Me With Her Words
I Wish She'd Hit Me Harder

TheJohnston;
( L )