A longing heart is what I see, a lovely write this poem is;

Keep on writing on what you feel and like kabs...

Sweet poem, hun` . I like it .
Thank yu for yher comment (:
..ღ__MiNDYY

Very simple, tender and clear poem.

you may want to capitalize all your "I"s
Keep it up

*I may not comment on all your poems, but I will rate

Very cute and full of meaning! 5/5
Keep up the good work!

God Bless,
Taylor

I really like this poem. It inspire me to write some more right now. good job!

This indeed is a very heartfelt dedication to the one you love, very nicely written

all the best and take care

Aww, short and sweet. A very nice poem to read :). Good work.

Great poem... cute nice job good work

This was very nice... 5/5. I just had a suggestion for the last stanza; it might be more powerful if it were to be changed to this:
"I may not be a perfect girl
But i know what is true,
I'll always be the girl
That is forever true!"
Other than that, excellent job.

Another beautiful love poem by you. You are very good at writing love poems. Keep up the good work, 5/5

Letty

I liked this, I found it really sweet.
I enjoyed the flow and wording muchly, it really captured me.