This is different, but i like it....good work....=] bye xxx

Damn!! this is just amazing....simply great....spl the last stanza is just outstanding...loved every word and the way u presented them...keep it up

all the best and take care

Very intense and deep. Word choices were excellent. I really loved reading this piece. You did an amazing job on this. ~BRAVO~

Very intense and deep. Word choices were excellent. I really loved reading this piece. You did an amazing job on this. ~BRAVO~