Comments : Darkness

  • 17 years ago

    by A Former Outcast

    I like the idea. The idea of repeating the first line of each stanza is very unique. Keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Hey i'll contribute. i hope you prove your friend wrong:) good luck. anyway great poem i loved the detailing. take care

  • 17 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    I liked your poem very much! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Oh wow! excellent...i totally loved it...5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Sorry computer won't let me vote.

  • 17 years ago

    by xxmichaelxx

    Well, it was ok. but i think you should put more. and well, it's kinda ok, just maybe, umm, practice more and be better. but i really like it. tell him that even tho u don't get 100 votes ur still trying. or/and just watever

  • 17 years ago

    by endless tears

    Wow this was good.
    short but good.
    you have some reall talient.