I absolutly loved this poem great job 5/5

Wow this poem is so beautifully written i love the words u chose they showed every bit of emotion.
im having a bit of trouble with one of my closest friends and this poem just inspires me to keep trying to make things better. well done this poem truly touched my heart.

sophie:)

Beuatifully write poem.enjoyable piece to read...5/5

Loved the story.... interesting... got my attention...

I love the range in your poetry it is so cool this poem should be inspirational rather than friendship this was another great poem your poems are gettin better as i go down reading them

xxx alex xxx

Great poem! Beautifully written. And yes every hero does need a hero!
5/5