This poem sounds excellent in spanish..i absolutely love it..5 for me!

This was real good. I like the spanish version better. Lol. you have talent too!! Keep it up...5/5 Cuidate.

-Poetess

Thats beautiful. its really great. i know exactly how you feel. keep writing.

-xox-

That was good...
heart break kills...
i wish love would never end...
i fall soo fast...
and it all comes crashing down on me...
check out some of my other poems...
Kat

Ooh! How pretty! I loved it and I thank you for commenting my poems!!! MUCHO GRACIAS JOSE!!!
tu poema es muy bonita

This is really good, que triste , cuidate

Muyyyyy kinda jose!!!! mucho gusto y bonita!! I cant tell you have gone through a lost loved and you loved them a lot i hope it gets better for you i really enjoy reading this great job
5/5
kasia adios