WOW! How you wrote and structured that, made it a very powerful poem. I wasn't expecting the ending, which makes it even better. Your improving hun! Keep it up and i'll keep reading. =] 5/5

Tammie xo

I completely agree with Tammie. It was a really powerful poem and there was heaps of emotions in it! Keep writing =]

Pip xxx

Thats a nice poem!
liked it alot...

Very good poem, deep and truely passionate. I like poem like these that don't give you every detail but just enough....VNP