I like the poem..

..its just i dont understand it much.. i wish i did.. maybe when u ahve time u can explain it ot me... if u want to :)

Hey Shriya this is sad and it's touching... i love your poems

Shriya, once again a great poem, youve done well once again.This poem is very desccribed well. I hope to see more of these poems great work. I love it its deep and very starnge in a good way . Looking forward for more poems like this one. Your best friend emily xox love you byebye!!

That was.....Great. I enjoyed it. It is a sad story. Were did you come up with it? You have an amazing mind.