Aww..i wrote a poem like this too. I really liked yours though.. Um..check mines out i guess. best wishes

Um im not sure how long it took me to write it...a couple days i guess cuz i kept changing it but yeah hope all is well. hey um...how old are you??im just curious like that...

Poem or not, i like it. you just kinda put your feelings out there, and it came out pretty nicely. keep writing!!
>>Emily@->-

I really like it! i would give it a 5!
keep up the good work!